Eliza Coltt

[Eliza Coltt]

HOGWARTS SCHOOL of WITCHCRAFT and WIZARDRY

Headmaster: Albus Dumbledore
Order of Merlin First Class, Grand Sorc. Chf. Warlock of the Wizenagmot, Supreme Mugwump and International Confed. of Wizards

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Miss E. J. Coltt
Smallest room in the second right hall, 4th door on the left side
134 Walsingham Court
Billingham
Cleveland, England, UK

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The envelope was thick and heavy, made of yellowish parchment, and the address was written in emerald green ink. There was no stamp.

Dear Miss Coltt,
We are pleased to inform you that you have a place at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment. Term begins on 1st of September. We await your owl by no later then 31st of July.

Yours Sincerely

Minerva McGonagall
Deputy Headmistress

Hogwarts students will require:

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Characters Full Name: Eliza Janin Coltt
Characters Sex: Female
Characters Age: Fifteen
Characters Height: 5'5
Would You Like A Custom Title: Ms. Emotion
Face Claim: Daveigh Chase
HP Cannon or Original Character?: Original

Characters Appearance: Eliza has a sort of pale complexion, very slightly tan actually. Her hair is a reddish-brown and flows down to her mid-back, and throws off a reddish glow in sunlight. Her body is slim. Eliza's eyes are an icy grayish-blue that seem to always show that she's sad, even when she's not. She has a faint scar on her right cheek that isn't noticeable unless you are facing her. And also a scar running down from her elbow to the center of her palm, and it is very noticeable that you'd have to be blind not to notice it.

.::+ Likes: +::.
D.A.D.A
Potions
Care of Magical Creatures
Getting along with others
Making friends
Understanding
Being understood
Writing
Drawing what she sees

.::- Dislikes: -::.
Charms
Transfiguration
Being ignored
Being abandoned
Misunderstanding
Showing [emotional/physical] weakness
Staying inside
Lies

Summary of characters personality: Eliza can be very stubborn when she wants something, like if she wants something done. She isn't much of a 'sit-down' person, and if there is a task she needs done, she'll make sure it is without a doubt. She has her arrogant moments, and has her sarcastic moments. But, most of all, she's quiet and thoughtful. Not much of a person of many words. But, when she does speak, she usually is very overpowering and bold; something no one can miss. And, when she is quiet and thoughtful, she seems very solemn.

When she's around friends, she is the total opposite: goofy, loud, childish. She's also very trusting and is loyal to her friends. She is skilled in all classes. Her main expertise revolve around lying, persuading and convincing. Though she only uses those qualities when she thinks necessary, but that is often. She can be very controlling and has a very short temper. If you're her enemy, she'll be a cold harpy toward you. If you're her friend, she'll be very kind and trusting of you. Not to mention immensely defensive, she won't stand to hear a bad word about her friends.

Her intelligence is outstanding, which is most of the reason she excels in her classes. She will offer help to someone when needed, otherwise she'll just brush it off. She can be caring and gentle, but is hardly given the chance to make it a short explanation. She loves to play around, but is usually the 'mature one'. She is responsible, but has rebel moments. She doesn't really respect adults much considering she didn't really live around them, and doesn't believe much in authority. Eliza's emotions are very strong and are not to be messed with.

2. The Standard Book of Spells Grade

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Blood Status: Half blood
Wand: Maple, 11 ½ inches, Pheonix tail feather

~*::Magical Talents & Strengths ::*~
Excels in Potions
Exceeds in D.A.D.A
Is able to speak to snakes [Parselmouth]
Passes Care of Magical Creatures
Good at performing dark spells
Excels at 'Stupefy'

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Uncoordinated
Terrible with flying
Not able to do charms too well
Terrible at keeping up if ever playing Quidditch
Not very good at levitation spells
Very bad at disarming charm

Your Preferred and Least Preferred House: Slytherin/Ravenclaw (prefer one of them) Hufflepuff (least preferred)
Favourite class & Teacher: N/A
Least favourite class & Teacher: Herbology (can't remember prof.'s name)
Quidditch Position?: N/A

3. A History of Magic by Bathilda Bagshot

Characters History (2 or more paragraphs): Eliza hasn't had the most pleasant of lives, but has lived to endure it. She and her twin brother, Rafael, were born to Anthony and Lila Coltt. But, it wasn't such a great childhood. Eliza was almost constantly alone, except for her brother being around. Her mother left a lot, and was barely home. She was an Auror. And her father was a employee at the Ministry of Magic, in the Department of Mysteries. Her brother was always around, but she still felt as if she had been abandoned. So, naturally, she learned to cope with being alone. And practically abandoned.

As she got older, she noticed her brother flowing farther apart from her. Until they barely spoke a word to each other. She didn't know exactly what it was that was happening to him, but she knew it had something to do with the Dark Arts, and also she figured out that he had heard her speaking to snakes. She tried to talk to him, but he just pushed her away. Saying he wanted nothing to do with her. Eliza coped miserably along. Her brother had been the only one she could talk to, the only one who was around mort importantly, but also the only one she could trust, and rely on. When she was 12, her father died suddenly for a reason that her mother wouldn't say. She felt abandoned, and hated it. But she taught herself not to mind certain things, like being alone, silence, and most of all being around her brother. They had a lot of conficts after they split. And that's what got her through, building up her walls, strengthening her emotions to where they seemed to barely exist, but it's also what made her the way she was.

Characters Family & Relations: Lila Coltt, mother. Anthony Coltt, father, deceased. Rafael Coltt, twin brother. Very, very distantly related to the Riddles.
Characters Goals: To become a Ministry official (in memory of her father), succeed in classes all through school, keep at least 5 reliable friends
Charcters Fears: Death, Spiders, Heights
Characters Alliance: Dumbledore

4. A Beginners Guide to Transfiguration by Emeric Switch

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Characters Patronus: A panther
Characters Pets: Owl
Animagi or Metamorphmagi: N/A

5. Magical Theory by Adalbert Waffling

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Example of Roleplay: Eliza walked through the corridor, off in her own thoughts. This was one of the very rare times she was alone. She sighed softly, stopping to lean against a wall. She brushed her hair out of her face. She was so tired of the dreary days in school, and she felt a bit claustrophobic. Being stuck inside practically all day was never something Eliza had liked.

She just stayed there, leaning against the wall. Her thoughts slowly faded away, until there was nothing left for her to think about, to ponder. She sighed heavily, smoothing her hair a bit. Eliza really didn't enjoy being stuck inside, and doubted that she ever would like it. Even if it was freezing outside, she'd rather be out there. Her thoughts came back, but softly flowing through her mind.

'Is it really worth it?' She asked herself. She knew the answer. Yes. Yes, it was worth it. Going to a wizarding school, learning the art of it, learning spells and charms, everything. Eliza sighed, frowning slightly. This was frustrating, but she would cope. Not like she wasn't used to the situation. She gulped, taking a small breath at the memories that washed over her and made her ice cold. Her brother shoving her away from him...saying he didn't want anything to do with her...then being alone for the longest of time. She bit her lip hard, keeping back the small whimper of pain at the memories back. Seeing them again was like a slap in the face. Eliza shook her head, taking a few deep breaths. Then she pushed off from the wall and walked down the halls, refusing to let the painful images go in front of her eyes.

How did you find us?: Another site, HP 19 Years Later
Any Questions?: Nope

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[Ron Weasley]

Hi Elisa! Welcome to S C A R R E D! XD It's great to have you

Okay I'm gonna get right in, I'll go section by section okay XD

First of I really like this character, shes very interesting. The application is great so far and Your RP sample though a little on the short side is great quality writing. I think once you get started all you need to do is just add a bit more description to your writing and then you're good to go. You're focus on the character is brill, just remember to add her surroundings into the mix okay, don't worry we're not asking for an essay though XD Great job!

Magical Me:
Personality is great, some nice flaws and strengths in there so it will be interesting to see her interacting with her fellow students. Just add a few more things to her likes and dislikes, for example; hobbies, food she likes and doesn't like, music ect just to flesh her out a bit more okay XD

Okay The Standard Book of Spells:
This is looking great, the only thing it needs is just a little more in the strengths and weaknesses bit for example are their any spells shes awesome or crap at? Can she pull of f a wicked bat bogey hex? Does she struggle with levitation charms? Is she great at magical cooking or does she fail at it? just a few additions here okay XD

A History of Magic
Right, History has a good base, we get a small glimpse into her life but it needs more depth, you've scratched the surface really well, now its time to go deep if you get me?

Okay her dads job. You say was a ministry worker but he was very rarely home so which department was he in and why was he always away? What work did he do there? Why did it have such an effect on the family, has the lack of a mother and father figure in her younger life tainted her veiw of adults/autority figures on a whole?
You also mention that she is a Parcelmouth, so what we need to ask is how that came about? We'll need to see some evidence to prove why Elisa should have that skill since it is incredibly rare among Wizards/Witches and is mostly related to those on the Dark side okay

Now paragraph two is also good but still only just scratching the surface and its paragraph two that intrigues me the most So why exactly did er brother start to drift away from her? It seems like they had a solid relationship at first so what events occurred that caused Rafael to break away form the family? Why did it have such a bad effect on Elisa? Was it the dark arts or did he see things in Elisa he didn't like? It seem like its had a huge effect on her character as a whole so I'd like to know more about this realtionship okay

As mentioned above the RP sample is great so just add those revision to your ap and post in here when you're done okay if you have any questions or you need a hand then just PM me okay

[Eliza Coltt]

Ok, I fixed it. But I also added something else in the history that kind of adds something a bit important.

[Ron Weasley]

Okay, great Elisa

Welcome to S C A R R E D Go introduce yourself at The House Tables and then join us in RPing

[Eliza Coltt]

Kinda confused on the 'introduce yourself at the House Tables' thing. :\